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BigD's blog: "poems"

created on 11/23/2007  |  http://fubar.com/poems/b158517
The cold air grows thick with a stench of rotting decaying flesh What have they done? I ask the darkened midnight sky As I step over the disembodied head that lays before me Today was my first day on the job and I was hoping it would go smothly A few speeders and drug busts was what I had expected But that wasnt so, I was to find out how wrong I truly was I had gotten a call from a young girl named Jill And she told me of the scene in which she and her friend Jack had found Such a bloody disturbing mess she had described to me So I came over as quickly as I could, making good time If Id have to guess at how quickly it took for me to show up there Id say it was only a matter of minutes No more then ten Im sure So here I am on this dark and gloomy night The pale glow of a full moon lays its gaze upon me Along with the stares of the nighttime creatures The scene in which I am seeing before me horrifys me ever so All of the blood and gore from the bodies And how mudilated they all are, chills me to the very core There must have been five or so murders here I think So much blood, so much death I cant help but to wonder why it is someone would do such a thing The wind whistles through the trees uneasily Swaying their branches back and forth ever so gently The crunch and snap of leaves and twigs can be heard Someone or something I know is behind me With my gun raised, I make a quick turn Only to find the chilling stillness that clings to the air Like the stench of all this rotting decay that lays all around I call out for the person or persons that I know are there, hiding in the shadows Although I may not be able to see them I know that they are there, hiding in the shadows, the stillness of night So I call out again as I take a step forward Not knowing what lays before me or what will happen next When sudenly out of the blue, a pair of hands grasps my throat Squeezing tightly, all I can do is drop my gun in fear As the smooth hands of the person behind me tighten their grasp around my throat And the nails that are as sharp as steel That would be able to cut through my neck like a warm knife through butter start to dig in And small tracks of blood begins to flow "You picked the wrong day Sir, to come to this park at night" A young womans beautiful voice whispers in my ear "I hate party crashers most of all" she goes on to add quietly "I think ill make you pay for your mistake now and become my servant" Startled, I ask "Servant?" my voice quivering slightly "Yes, my very own pet to do with as I wish for as long as I see fit" She says as she quickly lets go of my bleeding throat And grabs my head sharply tilting it to the side It is then that I feel the piercing of the two fangs As they effortlessly cut their way into my already bleeding flesh My body becomes motionless, numb as my eyes close And soon the world around me starts to spin as her laughter echos off the insides of my mind Then slowly but surely everything that I know of this life of mine starts to slip away ever so gently And my world enters complete darkness as I finaly die She lets go of my body and I fall into the muddy redend ground I dont know how long it was, but after awhile I rose again Only this time, I was one of the night It is now that I know my purpose in this life To serve my mistress, the vampire queen And do all that she comands of me Taking my hand and helping me up she says quietly "Now we must get you to feed and gain your strength" Letting go of my hand she points to a tree A young woman is tied and gagged there, not even a twelve feet away from me "Go no child and feed of the blood of life and quench your thirst" I can only nod as I take those few steps to the young woman and happily drain her of her life It was on this night, that I started my life anew ***note*** I wrote this to see how good a story/poem would be. any feedback would be much appreciated, thanks ^_^
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