The editor has finished reviewing my story for literotica and he made some improvements and gave me some tips on writing too.
I will be submitting the story to literotica probably tomorrow sometime after I receive a reply from the editor to a new message to him.
I have also submitted another story for him to review and edit. He will be getting on that one right away.
I began to read some stories in literotica last night for the first time and I do believe that my story called FIRST CLASS will do very well there.
I will keep you all posted on the progress of things.